Thanks for posting this new chapter. The development of Gwen as a fully-sexual woman is going nicely. The pacing is excellent. I love that the person pushing Gwen is her sister-in-law, married to her brother, as it makes the story more intimate. Maybe I don't remember but the reference to Gwen's father's sexuality was interesting. Thanks for sharing your writing.
p.s. - maybe run the story through a grammar checker before submitting - a few errors remain. Last sentence - relive vs relieve, I think.
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Anonymous11/08/13
Very nice!
Can't wait for the inevitable first time Gwen takes her husband into her mouth. The groundwork has been laid. Love this saga. Keep up the good work.
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I'm enjoying the story
Thanks for posting this new chapter. The development of Gwen as a fully-sexual woman is going nicely. The pacing is excellent. I love that the person pushing Gwen is her sister-in-law, married to her brother, as it makes the story more intimate. Maybe I don't remember but the reference to Gwen's father's sexuality was interesting. Thanks for sharing your writing.
p.s. - maybe run the story through a grammar checker before submitting - a few errors remain. Last sentence - relive vs relieve, I think.
Very nice!
Can't wait for the inevitable first time Gwen takes her husband into her mouth. The groundwork has been laid. Love this saga. Keep up the good work.
Really enjoyed this
Well written and a nice easy pace to the story.
Nicely erotic
Brilliant
Each chapter gets better and better and the writing is so fluid so real
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