I'm truly enjoying the story line, to me it's very believe able. I like the the tenderness you injected into the story between Charlie and Alice. I can't wait for the next chapter, hurry up please. Oh one more thing, thank you for having an all natural woman. To hear she doesn't shave and likes to be nude is a plus to me.
Thanks for the comments and encouragement. Chapter. 1, for some reason, is in First Time. While Ch. 2 is here. Anyway, Ch. 3 will probably also show up here in a few days or so. I'll probably start working on chapter 4 in a day or so. As you can probably guess, parts of Alice are based on a real person with a different name that I knew long ago.
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Good start
Could be a wonderful beginning for a few more chapters. Looking forward.
Too Short
Too short, need more than 1 page. Looking forward to more. :-)
Your Teasing Me
I'm truly enjoying the story line, to me it's very believe able. I like the the tenderness you injected into the story between Charlie and Alice. I can't wait for the next chapter, hurry up please. Oh one more thing, thank you for having an all natural woman. To hear she doesn't shave and likes to be nude is a plus to me.
ch. 3 is on the way
Thanks for the comments and encouragement. Chapter. 1, for some reason, is in First Time. While Ch. 2 is here. Anyway, Ch. 3 will probably also show up here in a few days or so. I'll probably start working on chapter 4 in a day or so. As you can probably guess, parts of Alice are based on a real person with a different name that I knew long ago.
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