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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/10/13

A Lill' Silly Teeny Story

Make Believe In La La Land. ONE STAR if you quit writing.

vanderdecken

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by RyeandGingerAyle11/10/13

Two people being naughty!

Nice story, well written - the heat certainly cums through.

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by Anonymous11/10/13

have a few

more of those rye and gingerales you moron.The story well it must be great to have such a great wife and good friend glad i'm not them.

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by Anonymous11/10/13

Crossed the line

Another chucky is made and another marriage down the drain. Weak story and short thank g-d.

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by Anonymous11/10/13

Puzzling

It always puzzles me why people read the stories in certain categories just so they can hate on them in the comments.

Of course it's a cuckold story...that's why it's in 'Loving Wives'. Duh!

Nice quick story, thanks

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by Lickideesplit11/10/13

Magic

"We just drifted into fucking! Nobody planned it! It was just sex!" GMAFB

Did BOTH spouses retire (to their separate tents) at the same time? Awkward! Was there, instead, a 5-10 minute delay in retiring time? Even more awkward! The second spouse to sack out was essentially told ... "We have plans which DO NOT involve you. The sooner you leave, the faster we can get on with OUR plan!"

2.7 = 3*

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by Anonymous11/10/13

Cuckold stories belong in Fetish.

1*

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by CharlieB411/10/13

More

Okay idea but you need to expand it more. Too short. No conflicting emotions or second thoughts of their respective partners before, during or after the event. It just sneaks over 2.5 so a somewhat reluctant 3*

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by Erotonaut11/11/13

Solid debut

Yes, it would have benefited from being longer, but I liked the energetic way in which it was written.

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by Adam Rightmann03/18/15

Short, sweet and hot

thanks, hope to read more of you and Kyle.

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by rightbank03/28/15

her soon to be ex-husband

was right, and he left them alone anyway.

is it time for forrest gump to quote his momma?

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