All Comments on 'Camping'

Make Believe In La La Land. ONE STAR if you quit writing.

vanderdecken

Nice story, well written - the heat certainly cums through.

more of those rye and gingerales you moron.The story well it must be great to have such a great wife and good friend glad i'm not them.

Another chucky is made and another marriage down the drain. Weak story and short thank g-d.

It always puzzles me why people read the stories in certain categories just so they can hate on them in the comments.

Of course it's a cuckold story...that's why it's in 'Loving Wives'. Duh!

Nice quick story, thanks

"We just drifted into fucking! Nobody planned it! It was just sex!" GMAFB

Did BOTH spouses retire (to their separate tents) at the same time? Awkward! Was there, instead, a 5-10 minute delay in retiring time? Even more awkward! The second spouse to sack out was essentially told ... "We have plans which DO NOT involve you. The sooner you leave, the faster we can get on with OUR plan!"

2.7 = 3*

1*

Okay idea but you need to expand it more. Too short. No conflicting emotions or second thoughts of their respective partners before, during or after the event. It just sneaks over 2.5 so a somewhat reluctant 3*

Yes, it would have benefited from being longer, but I liked the energetic way in which it was written.

thanks, hope to read more of you and Kyle.

was right, and he left them alone anyway.

is it time for forrest gump to quote his momma?

My wife's friend went camping with us. She came into the tent after I went to bed got naked and crawled up on my face and told me my wife went to take a shower. My wife came back as her friend got in her sleeping bag . Wife got in our sleeping bag with me . Kissing me good night she felt my hard on whispering in my ear that her friend was a sleep and got naked. She crawled on top and guided my cock into her pussy . She bent down whispering wanting to know what I had eaten that it had a great taste . I told her it was just some sweets. She asked if we had anymore that she would like some tomorrow. I said her friend brought it with her. As my wife kept grinding I looked over to her friend and could see her sleeping bag moving at crouch level. Her smile told me she had some sweets for my wife tomorrow night.

Cuck and whore in the wild. An unnatural story.

Wow. A bit risky, but awesome

Yup. They will eventually get caught and two marriages go down the drain. Or, her husband and Kyle’s wife are already fucking each other and the four of them end up having a shared/limited open/joint marriage. You write well - please expand on this fragment of a story.