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One of your best
Possibly your best.
As you so often do, you paint such a wonderful picture. In this one there is also the feeling that there is something else behind it - not defined but wonderful and great. Congratulations for not trying to make the metophor (or whatever it is) more overt.
The flow is pretty good too.
Oldbear ,
i'm sure she'll walk with a delightful companion like U !! 5-ed .
Something about these lines "We'll walk with your arm holding mine
We'll walk out beyond pasture fence line" took my breath away.
Fantastic piece of writing here.
Awesome
you have started painting vast pictures in your words. this is an easy 5 from me
Really appreciate all the great comments - thanks very much.
Been getting some good coaching from great poets lately.
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