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by LesseloovesPeter11/05/13

I really really like this. It has intense imagery.

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by Koba11/06/13

Spelling

I just saw that I spelled carnivorous wrong in the poem. I thought I was perfect but this proves I'm wrong. Oh well. I'll try to fix but I've had problems doing that here before.

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by todski2811/06/13

One spelling mistake

Does not wreck the intense thoughts here.

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by Anonymous11/07/13

*****

Five.

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