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The Hotwife Ch. 02

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by clearlakequeen11/13/13

Really Enjoyed!

Really enjoyed your story, especially the differing viewpoints of each of the characters. Would have been interesting to hear more about hubbies emotions and his transformation into a sissy.
That said, this is definitely a loving wife story as the wife stays with little dick and giving him what he secretly desired, a submissive role in their marriage.
It was a win-win situation for everyone involved. Hope to read more of your stories!

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by Anonymous11/13/13

it's so nice......

One of the best things about a site like this, is that writers can submit their work and readers can submit their feedback (except where some poor, sensitive soul doesn't want to here the truth in reader's responses).

You've done an excellent job of painting a cuckold scenario. The bastard baby and obvious derision wifey has for cuckboy, the hot-wife's dominance with the wussy, obsequious behavior of the wimp husband are classic features of the cuckold genre.

The reality is that most men find both behaviors sickening and sad. No self-respecting man can appreciate an overbearing, disrespectful woman, any more than most women can't stand an overbearing, disrespectful man. Coupled with blatant, cruel and obvious infidelity, most men and women would prefer to see some tragic end, some explosive death, some murder/suicide scenario, rather than see their story continue.

That you did a good job telling the story falls well behind the reality that you chose a violently unpopular story-line to carry. And, by the way, not at all imaginative. Even your generally good spelling, punctuation and grammar do not cover that one....not even close.

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by OOAA11/13/13

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!! 5 stars!!!

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by Anonymous11/13/13

If OOAA and clearlake like your writing.....

You know you have written a Fetish story. Congrads all you need is kennyboy and you will have hit the trifecta. Like another commenter said Who would posssibly want to live like this? Either male or female. Just an episode in humiliation

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by Anonymous11/13/13

CRUDE AND RUDE

Not very nice,and therefore not sexy.Sex is only great when all involved are treated with kindness and respect.

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by devilspy200111/14/13

Yes all happy

As most couples with a dom wife and cuckold are. Cuckold gets what he wants and needs. Chastity, panties, creampies to eat. Some bi studs to suck and swallow, clean up after they have bred his wife, and sometimes they breed his tight pussy and breed him as well. Wife gets what she needs, a loving husband and all the studs with real man meat in her bed anytime she likes. Some even go for groups of studs to gangbang them. And some bi wives like a gf or two to sleep with her as well. As cuckold now sleeps in the guest bedroom. And us studs? Well we get to breed the best looking hot wives in our area. Breeding their pussy, ass, and mouth. The best are the new hot wives. Talk about tight pussy. Love it.

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by shang4011/17/13

Tantalising way of writing

Superb way to write. Congratulations
eating creampie is good but guiding super penis in wife's honeypot and then licking while they fuck is an ultimate experience, why it is a humiliation it is in fact a total pleasure of being TRUE Cuckold.

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