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A Shutter Click: Deadfall

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by todski2811/07/13

And there was

a neonurotic poem and I was happy,

great imagery,

They fall, but they are not muck
in a gutter, at least not yet.
They remain for a shutter click
then dead in a black and white photo

a photograph in my mind

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by LesseloovesPeter11/07/13

A great capture of a fall morning.

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by Ashesh911/07/13

An ode to Fall-en

Golden Leaves : nice & thnx for sharin' Neon .

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by Angeline11/08/13

Glad I got to see this!

There is wonderful movement in the poem from life to photograph and then just a complete stop with that "dead" in the last line. Always a pleasure to read you, Neo. :-)

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