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Grains of Sand

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by Anonymous

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by LesseloovesPeter11/07/13

Your love doth overflow her bucket, Oldbear.

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by todski2811/08/13

The stanzas

Look like gentle waves washing in and out, splashing you love on the sand at her feet

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by twelveoone11/09/13

you can look at this two ways OB63

as a chemist
a load of silicon dioxide
as a poet
Hallmark
either way
nice sendiment

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by Oldbear6311/10/13

Lol Twelveoone

No scientist, that's for sure. Yep kind of schmaltzy. Hallmark? maybe. I think I am just a sentimental completely hopeless 60 plus teenaged hopeless romantic.

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