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by Anonymous

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by steveleenow08/22/07

Wow...

This is a great story - I love your writing!

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by Anonymous09/28/07

Good story but needs editing

I would have like the story more but all the grammatical/spelling errors detracted from it.

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by SexxxyCuriosity11/16/08

I like it - but please get an editor.

Great story, but please use the volunteer editing program. There were so many grammatical errors, it was distracting and made it hard to enjoy what would have otherwise been fabulous writing.

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