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I'm Not Much of a Dancer Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/14/13

I enjoyed it, but...

It feels incomplete or thin to me. There could be so much more atmosphere and character and relationship building.

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by Arago00711/17/13

Interesting start...

For the first half of the story I couldn't figure out why it wasn't ranked higher... You have a really nice voice... Sweet, funny and a little vulnerable. Then it got almost a little "campy", which I also like sometimes, but the two halves didn't quite fit. Then the last paragraph made me think it was the start of a love story...if so, I would love to see another chapter.
This did turn me on, which is the goal i assume, so success!

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