All Comments on 'The Plumber'

I wouldn't want to be married to a faithless slut. Don't even find it a very hot fantasy. But whatever.

Your writing needs work, maybe you should try an editor. Everything seemed rushed. Other than that it was okay and I would love to hear more about the hot wife.

Another example of the low standards of Literotica.

Simply reading this story lowered my IQ by 20 points

As long as he doesn't go near her crotch!

As a bowl of cereal. Learn to write before posting. Then go back in moms basement and wiggle off.

Gay married husband

It reads like a middle schoolers fantasy written from moms basement. What a couple of losers!

....unless you like disgusting depraved sicko cucks I'd stay away from his works. This guys is among the worst of the sickos with the shit he writes. It is fucking disgusting how big of a cuck this guy is!

The reader quickly learns that Sweetie has a suspect past. Stripper with a boob job! I'm sure there is a conservative (limited former lovers who also has honored her marital vows) silicone-boobed former stripper (maybe even a few) out in Utah somewhere, but that is not the first image which pops into the LW reader's mind! PLUS, she and Hubby have done some sharing but stopped - because they can't find the right partners! So, we don't expect her to have many limits, nor him! So what? There is NO 'Gee, I wonder if there's going to be a problem!'. From that point on, it is like reading a weather report ... sorry, there's a LOT more uncertainty (drama) in a weather report!

Drop the boob job and the stripper past and the sharing! Then, add some uncertainty about what Hubby might do ... OR ... have Hubby try to draft the Plumbing Bull's Sweetie into being their Swap-Partners!

loser this piece of shit is.

see charlieb4 name and i threw up.

For all his 13 year old peers, cos this looks like its written by a fucked kid. A fag loving 13-15 year old that eats his best friends cum out of his girlfriends mick.

A good edit would help this one. Punctuation, spelling and structure need a bit of help.

Really isn't a bad effort. A little too imaginative for my taste. It falls into the ain't likely to happen in this lifetime.

How, even in fiction, any man is okay with his wife being a slut and exposing him to every social disease including a potentially fatal one like aids. So it's a story. So it's fiction. But what in the name of hell is interesting about a man being okay with a whore for a wife?

Erotic, not 100% believable though. This is a Loving Wife story. She loves her husband who is a good guy and a voyeur. They are a happy couple. The wife is a keeper.

A story that only an idiot could appreciate.

So you must have loved it Anonymous.

Great story. You're very hip to be turned on by your wives messing around. A lot of guys have the fantasy of watching their wives fuck other guys. They jack off and feel bad hence the negative anonymous comments.

Enjoyed the crap out of this. You should be more descriptive though.

If anonymous enjoyed all the crap out of this, why is it still a piece of shit?

It’s not good enough to be shit. Maybe the worst story I’ve ever read on this site.