All Comments on 'Fall From Grace Ch. 01'

Yuck

The whole first part of the story is very contrived: the fall in the shower, his ex-wife's confession that supposedly gives him license, and then his mother's tale about his incestuous "lessons". I half expected his father to show up an reminisce about their bi-curious "fishing trips" together. At least you stopped with only every female in 100 yards anxious to do your studly hero.

It was technically well written and with a little more time taken not to cram every erotic proposal and recounting of history into the same conversation, you'd have a much better story.

I can't wait for her sexucation to continue. Mom gets to teach her to give a proper blow job, and Nana will show her how to, what... the third hole?

Lets go for it!

extremely hot erotic.. an unique story line... accidental nudity, exb/voyeur, incest bonding n lust desires .... could be a more detailed, slow paced, more playing around, petting etc long story...more to this plssssss

thanks a ton!!