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Fall From Grace Ch. 01

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by Anonymous11/13/13

Yuck

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by talldarkfellow11/15/13

Too much, too fast.

The whole first part of the story is very contrived: the fall in the shower, his ex-wife's confession that supposedly gives him license, and then his mother's tale about his incestuous "lessons". I half expected his father to show up an reminisce about their bi-curious "fishing trips" together. At least you stopped with only every female in 100 yards anxious to do your studly hero.
It was technically well written and with a little more time taken not to cram every erotic proposal and recounting of history into the same conversation, you'd have a much better story.

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by blackknight31401/20/17

Oh boy... a good start to this story.

I can't wait for her sexucation to continue. Mom gets to teach her to give a proper blow job, and Nana will show her how to, what... the third hole?
Lets go for it!

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