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Yuck
Too much, too fast.
The whole first part of the story is very contrived: the fall in the shower, his ex-wife's confession that supposedly gives him license, and then his mother's tale about his incestuous "lessons". I half expected his father to show up an reminisce about their bi-curious "fishing trips" together. At least you stopped with only every female in 100 yards anxious to do your studly hero.
It was technically well written and with a little more time taken not to cram every erotic proposal and recounting of history into the same conversation, you'd have a much better story.
Oh boy... a good start to this story.
I can't wait for her sexucation to continue. Mom gets to teach her to give a proper blow job, and Nana will show her how to, what... the third hole?
Lets go for it!
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