I like your stuff, but your inconsistency in correctly using "your" and "you're" really grates.... "Your getting close" is wrong. "You are" can be shortened to "You're" "Your lips" is correct "You're lips" is wrong - see above. This is really very simple, but there's a great book by Lynne Truss which I'd recommend : "Eats, Shoots & Leaves"
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Good, but.....
I like your stuff, but your inconsistency in correctly using "your" and "you're" really grates....
"Your getting close" is wrong. "You are" can be shortened to "You're"
"Your lips" is correct
"You're lips" is wrong - see above.
This is really very simple, but there's a great book by Lynne Truss which I'd recommend : "Eats, Shoots & Leaves"
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