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by Anonymous

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by LesseloovesPeter11/08/13

Tantalizing use of language to build suspense and sensuality.

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by Oldbear6311/08/13

A woman's skin

soft warm with curves, softer places, warmer places within the curves. Verry nice read

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by twelveoone11/09/13

on to something here:

My hands will lead, my mouth will follow
but the rest is descriptive in an overly familiar way

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