All Comments on 'Skin'

by sajaxom

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Tantalizing use of language to build suspense and sensuality.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
A woman's skin

soft warm with curves, softer places, warmer places within the curves. Verry nice read

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
on to something here:

My hands will lead, my mouth will follow

but the rest is descriptive in an overly familiar way

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