If you're going to blast someone, take the time to ensure you haven't misspelled a few words yourself. What the fuck is a "condon"? Did you mean "condom", you fucking idiot?
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Anonymous07/06/14
to rubbish.. who are you....
..trying to kid?
To the author, that was a beautifully spun story. Just a suggestion, get into the intimate parts a little more in detail. If you hit hat, this will be spot-on. Good job :)
I just wanted to say thank you for the kind words and advice. This is actually a true story, so if you don't like the plot, you don't like history haha.
Rubbish
Condons need zzzzz shoot it up her
To "Rubbish":
If you're going to blast someone, take the time to ensure you haven't misspelled a few words yourself. What the fuck is a "condon"? Did you mean "condom", you fucking idiot?
to rubbish.. who are you....
..trying to kid?
To the author, that was a beautifully spun story. Just a suggestion, get into the intimate parts a little more in detail. If you hit hat, this will be spot-on. Good job :)
wew
One hell of a story.. More of this please
Thanks everybody!
I just wanted to say thank you for the kind words and advice. This is actually a true story, so if you don't like the plot, you don't like history haha.
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