Delightful twist at the end!! Will Alan and family go back to Clare's....and do you think they'll be sent upstairs again?? IF so, maybe Alan could introduce Clare to oral and anal?? Great pace and refreshingly simple plot!! LOL Cheers!
Good story overall, especially the twist ending, didn't see that coming! xD
One thing though: Hymens are NOT a membrane like that. It's an elastic ring around the opening that shouldn't tear. It rarely covers the whole opening, and if it does, it has to be surgically removed.
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Perfect "Cumming of Age" story!!
Delightful twist at the end!! Will Alan and family go back to Clare's....and do you think they'll be sent upstairs again?? IF so, maybe Alan could introduce Clare to oral and anal?? Great pace and refreshingly simple plot!! LOL Cheers!
Nice. 5*****
Thanks for writing. Good finish. tom anon
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The bit about the pill spoilt in
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Cute! I see a shotgun wedding comming
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Your just a fucking wanker
Good story overall, especially the twist ending, didn't see that coming! xD
One thing though: Hymens are NOT a membrane like that. It's an elastic ring around the opening that shouldn't tear. It rarely covers the whole opening, and if it does, it has to be surgically removed.
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