All Comments on 'From the Files of the ADT'

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carlieplumcarlieplumover 10 years ago

Great story! It's hard to set up alternate worlds quickly, but you make it look like a piece of cake. 5*

walkerlongwalkerlongover 10 years ago
original

A creative and original concept!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
winter?

this was an okay story, but its theme has nothing to do with winter. as a winter contest submission it pretty much disqualifies. as a favour i won't vote, rather than give a low score.

RavishingRedHead69RavishingRedHead69over 10 years ago
I have to agree

That it's both a great story but also not quite one that fits the theme.

Drat!

With a little tweaking you could easily establish this in the North Pole as one of Santa's newest endeavors ... fertility treatments.

"All I want for Christmas is some genetically perfect sperm" - lol

Great job, the story was fun and sexy.

patientleepatientleeover 10 years ago
I just wish the cold played more of a role in the process.

It was interesting and fun though!

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