Great story! It's hard to set up alternate worlds quickly, but you make it look like a piece of cake. 5*
A creative and original concept!
this was an okay story, but its theme has nothing to do with winter. as a winter contest submission it pretty much disqualifies. as a favour i won't vote, rather than give a low score.
That it's both a great story but also not quite one that fits the theme.
With a little tweaking you could easily establish this in the North Pole as one of Santa's newest endeavors ... fertility treatments.
"All I want for Christmas is some genetically perfect sperm" - lol
Great job, the story was fun and sexy.
It was interesting and fun though!
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