Morning Commute

A very descriptive poem :

Almost makes the Reader imagine he is on the same rain-whipped street !!

"Lives of quiet desperation"

Can be relieved by reading Lesse's poetry. I sincerely love the way you write.

I was walking to work the other morning in the scene described and I thought to myself "this would make a good poem" or maybe it was "this is something I could write a poem about." Something very vivid and poetic to me, a human connection perhaps, about it being too windy for an umbrella in the rain. Came back to me last night after I nixed two other starts.