How do you make a story totally unbelievable?? Simple!! Try to make out that the Reader is/was a participant!! Since she/he knows that they were NOT a participant any point of the story disappears!! Complete cr*p!! 1*
Godawful!
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Complete waste of time and effort!!
How do you make a story totally unbelievable??
Simple!!
Try to make out that the Reader is/was a participant!!
Since she/he knows that they were NOT a participant any point of the story disappears!!
Complete cr*p!!
1*
No Stars
Godawful!
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