Party Surprise

Nice Twist

After a mix of lust and dread, I enjoyed the ending! 5*

Great little twist at the end...LOL

This had all the elements of an Ashson vignette...slight reluctance, sensual enjoyment of both parties, 'hidden' exposure and raw passion...even ONE sharp, short smack on a bare bottom....and the denouement was unexpected..... thanks!!

Nice

I hate cheaters but I love when a loving married couple explore their fantasies anytime and everywhere. Carry on.

One of Your Best

Thanks Nice twist at the end.

Definitely well done

Brave, not to lock the door, but it's a fantasy I enjoy, especially if it was illicit, but well done, whatever the ending.

Chilley

Whew!

After several submissions in a row in which assertiveness bordered on non-consent, this one seemed to push that boundary even more forcefully! The final twist caught me with mouth agape! I now think the recent trend was designed to set us up for this image-reversal tale! Nicely done!

5*

Clever ending

Clever ending

Clever premise

But as with most of your stories you miss the mark

Nice

Well written and a surprise twist. Don't know if your longer works are as good but this one was enjoyable. Thanks!

Fabulous story. Love your finesse & ease with this genre. You truly are the Master Storyteller, sexy stories, well-drawn characters & underlying it all sardonic humour. Perfection. Please keep them coming. Your work keeps bringing me back to literotica. Your words feed my fantasies.

Absolutely loved it!

I can imagine the conversation on the drive home . . .