All Comments on 'Party Surprise'

After a mix of lust and dread, I enjoyed the ending! 5*

This had all the elements of an Ashson vignette...slight reluctance, sensual enjoyment of both parties, 'hidden' exposure and raw passion...even ONE sharp, short smack on a bare bottom....and the denouement was unexpected..... thanks!!

I hate cheaters but I love when a loving married couple explore their fantasies anytime and everywhere. Carry on.

Thanks Nice twist at the end.

Brave, not to lock the door, but it's a fantasy I enjoy, especially if it was illicit, but well done, whatever the ending.

Chilley

After several submissions in a row in which assertiveness bordered on non-consent, this one seemed to push that boundary even more forcefully! The final twist caught me with mouth agape! I now think the recent trend was designed to set us up for this image-reversal tale! Nicely done!

5*

Clever ending

But as with most of your stories you miss the mark

Well written and a surprise twist. Don't know if your longer works are as good but this one was enjoyable. Thanks!

Fabulous story. Love your finesse & ease with this genre. You truly are the Master Storyteller, sexy stories, well-drawn characters & underlying it all sardonic humour. Perfection. Please keep them coming. Your work keeps bringing me back to literotica. Your words feed my fantasies.

I can imagine the conversation on the drive home . . .

He seemed like a total asshole and winds up being a loving husband who's wife was playing along? That was fun. I didn't see it coming.

Expected it, but still loved it, great description of a sexual situation.