All Comments on 'Mom Helps Hurt Son Take A Shower'

this is similar to what happened to my family except it happened when I was 14

it was a good storyline until the end, but was it written by a 5 year old kid?

Had to stop myself from cumming...all throughout the story. Perfect ending! Pieater

I loved it, wish I was there

I came SO hard, you have no idea.

That is so damn hot please share more and keep it cumming

What a great story you wrote. It kept me hard and I'm 70.

The only thing that would make this story better would be to have the dad lick his son's cock clean and suck the son off.

aarrrgh@gmail.com

Very hot story. I agree with aarrghh.... dad should have sucked off his son and then spit the cum in mom's mouth.

In a loving family there should be no secrets and no shame as this terrific story illustrates. (By the way, I'm a Ph.D. and college prof--ignore FUCK below. You're English is fine, sir, he's a moron.) Tony is a great specimen of a sexy young male, tall, very well built, with a supersized dick and pair of overflowing young balls. He's also aggressive, as is fitting for an alpha male like him. He bewitches his voluptuous mother and pushes her to the limit, and way beyond. Tony loves fucking his mother when she's on the phone with dad, and dad turns out to love it as his great big boy fucks the shit out of his mother's wide open welcoming motherly twat and blows his big balls up her hot mommy-cunt. It's a sure thing that when dad's back he'll be slurping Tony's hot cum out of his wife, Tony's Mom's twat, then go on to get his son's ball cream straight from the source. Tony, the arrogant bastard, will love to watch his father down there swinging on his big joint and swallowing his cum. And then, why not? he'll fuck his dad up the ass. No secrets, no shame in this family!

i loved it but wouldnt u feel a little grossed out about this.

I wish that the threesome at the end of the story was longer. However, I did enjoy this and it was a good read.

Loved the whole story. I just thought the part where the dad eats his sons cum from his moms pussy is kinda gay. Other than that, Superb!

mom was fucking both her men they both should have cumm on her face

Thank you sharing your story with us, its probobly the best ive ever read. And just let me tell you this story is perfect, dont listen to the losers on this site.

OMG this is hot im having cum come out of my pussy at this momment fukin sexy ahhhhhhhh it feels real good

so damn hot, waiting on part two

I can only dream of trading places with him

Damn this shit is really tight. I love the story. Make a part 2.

damn thats hot, i wish i hurt my hands so my mom would have to do that... i want my moms pussy

damn thats hot but it would have been alot better if dad didnt come itno the picture..... mom and son is the hottest thing ever, i wish mom would walk in on me oin the shower so she could see me or i wish i hurt my hands

I agree with the Prof. The English is OK and conveys the intensity of the participants' experiences quite well. The few typos are easy to fix and don't detract at all from the erotic nature of the story. Oedipus is still with us but some probably should be careful about the downside, if dad is not so understanding and in to sharing.

HOT STUFF... almost thought that i am gonna shoot in my pants...

I'm a 15 years old kid, and it was okay... You should send it to me so I can revise it.... It was too straight forward. Make it reality, that's what the media thrives for.... Make her hard to get, not okay I'll do it. And add emotion into it... Like the cold rush had rushed through my veins and his penis thrust my pussy rapidly. Know what I'm saying? Other than that, it kind of entertained me ;)

This is purely disgusting, who ever wants to fuck their mom should be shot...SERIOUSLY. This shit isn't even a laughing matter, for one I highly doubt the husband would let his son fuck his wife, come on guys stop jerking of to stories and get laid in real life you bunch of losers :)

OMg That was soo hot I've jerked off 10 times to this story . i would really like to chat with you . please email me at fastmike1976@yahoo.com

you think this is wrong but its not think back to adam and eve they had to fuck eachother and there kids to make more and thats how all of us got made so at the end of the day its not wrong but good

make a video!!;)

I wish you were my mom so when I get home everyday I can fuck u omg that would be amazing

I hoped that you would expand it a little?

i cant stop reading it its so great i wish there were more like these :(

Is what you said true

that was really hot i was 16 when i first fucked my mon i used to love fucking her i dont write but one night she was haveing leg cramp i started rubbing her legs and b4 long i was playing with her pussy and that leed to me fucking her

i starter to fuck my mom when i us 14 . i ask her about sex,haw to fuck,she had been dracking some that night i pulled my dick out .she startd suck me, we fuck .i put 3 louds of cum inside her pussy that night love having incest wheth my mom.like reading stroreslike this.

thats a hot story i wish i culd fuck my mom like that but idk how too ask her.

I totally agree this would make an amazing video, i would love to watch ;)

A great story and experience for them all,,,I enjoyed fuck sessions with mom but dad had gone by then,,,but I met him a few years later and fucked his new wife while he watched.

Happy.................. Happy.................... Happy..... ..................................................LAROC

upload more man.

MORE!!! Luv to read all 3 enjoying each other!

ive never read to a good story like urs before. its the best, since i start reading eat i had already a hard on, and till it end i jerk off immediately, cannot take it any longer. how didi you write such a beautiful story like this?????????

Man that was wonderful, I makes me want to fuck you really.

Maybe if his mom,had taught him how to really please a woman,he may have had a happy marriage...My mom,started to teach me at 16 years of age...My dad was always somewhere working,far from home,and she became my teacher,as well as a lover...I am in my sixties,married,with several kids,Still make love to my wife like I did when we first married,35 years ago...She was divorced,and after our wedding night,making love with her,she stated,she was glad I knew how to please a woman,instead of pleasing myself ,forgetting about her needs...ripper

i've read this story before on here, and then lost it for ages.

just found it again and it is one of the BEST stories by far!!

work of genius, gets me hard EVERY time.

but if this was true, I came too

I've saw many stories, i don't care if its fake, but it was one of the best stories i've ever saw. Well done ;)

For the read.

Absolutely terribly written, unsure how it's gotten such high ratings. I've read a lot of stories and don't get why it involves so many short sentences and first person accounts of it. Quit.

That last comment was written by a little bitch.Short enough for you. Loved the story, ignore the bitch.

Would love to read more

weard so difrent times difrent idias

different. go back to school. gave it a 5

Hey me too wanna fuck my mom but I am scared

I get that the premise of the story is that mom "helps" because the kid hurt his hands... but if he can't hold his own dick to piss, how is he playing with her pussy, spreading her ass cheeks, etc.? It just threw me off. Other than that critique, it was a decent story.

It was a good story the premise was imaginative but the flow was non existent and the dialogue was terrible. It was so obvious it hurt. I'm not trying to hurt you feelings but read up on making stories flow and on how to improve you dialogue. Also remember to use punctuation because it's basic grammar. Overall interesting but the writing needs work. Once you've read up on those two topics just write. Keep on writing until it flows and read other people's literature, you'll see the difference and the similarities it's really aid you improvement. Hope this was helpful.

Love it

Wish u would write more 2 this

This is one I have always returned.

I showed this story to a woman I was chatting to online who liked it so much that we met, for real, in a hotel and we acted out the whole thing.

So erotic.

Bristolbloke1967@hotmail.co.uk

Excellent story. As for the anonymous literary critics? If they can’t use their name, STFU!

5*

This Needs To Be Continued ASAP

I'm one of those "anonymous literary critics".

However, I absolutely LOVED this story!

Hot!!!

Wow. I'd love to have this happen to me. And I wouldn't care I'd I was the dad or the son. I literally came without touching my cock.

I had an accident at work and for the first couple of weeks I was stuck in bed, I told my wife to carry on as normal and go to work because we needed the money,my mother will come up and look after me I said, reluctantly she carried on working,my mother came to our house around 10 o'clock every morning as she was retired now, after a few days I had to have a wash and told mum, I said you'll have to give me a bed bath ,of course I will it'll be like when you were a baby she laughed! I had two broken legs and a fractured shoulder,it was a bit of a struggle to get my clothes off but we managed it, my underwear were the last thing to come off and then mum said that she'd be back with some hot water in a couple of minutes, she started washing my upper body and then moved to my thighs as soon as I felt the sponge touch my balls I just couldn't help get an erection, oh I'm sorry mum said I didn't mean to touch them! I couldn't do anything and didn't say anything either! A bit different from when you were a baby mum said still washing my thighs! My cock kept growing until I couldn't get any harder, I was 9 inches long and mum looked on in disbelief at my cock! I'll wash that to she said and ran the sponge up and down my cock, I made a sigh and apologised to her, god this is so embarrassing mum, don't be stupid she said, it looks as if jenny (my wife) needs to help you with that, not half I said I haven't had any for weeks! I can see that for myself putting the sponge down on the bed, my cock was covered in soapy bubbles and mum wiped them off with her hand gripping my cock at the same time! There nice and clean now she said and give me a cheeky smile and continued to stroke me back and forth! Is this what you needed sweetheart? Oh my god mum I said! Yes I thought so she replied and got faster with her strokes! Jesus that's a big dick she said! Mum felt my balls with her other hand then took her right hand off my cock and undid the buttons on her top and hitched her dress up! Mum I said what are you doing? Just be quiet and lay there! Mum massaged my balls with one hand and put her other hand in her knickers! Aahhh yes she gasped! Take them off mum I told her, she stood up and pulled her knickers down and sat on the edge of the bed carrying on where she left off wanking my cock and playing with her pussy! I love that hairy pussy mum take the rest of it off! There was my mother naked on my bed wanking me off! Cum for me sweetheart she said and it wasn't long before I shot my load up in the air and over her tits

I've been fucking my mom and sisters and grandma and I can't get enough of their tight pussys and I love when one is blowing me and another walks in and smiles