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Beautiful story
Great Story!
This is a great erotic story. Nothing is rushed. Characters are realistic. One of the best I've read, ever. Next chapter?
Very good
I really enjoyed it. Just read over it to correct some of the mistakes.
Damn, damn, Damn ,damn, Damn
Oh fuck me to tears; that's basically the dream I've been having about my niece Carissa for the last 4 months. I'm never going to get to sleep tonight! We'd try to stay away from each other but kept ending up together. We never meant anything to happen; and it hasn't beyond hugs, cuddling, holding hands, entwined fingers - but we know it's there "just waiting to come out", A-r-g-h
Added to my All-Time Favorite bookmarks
DKP
As with your other stories; there are numerous errors that should be caught by an Editor, but your stories are good regardless. The TALENT is there, just need to clean it up a bit. Please keep writing.
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