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She takes off her thong and then later running her hand over her underwear and felling the wetness through it. Get a proof reader and try again.
Good/Nice Start!
Thinking you should add additional chapters to this one. Nice first time story line, continue to explore your talents!
Previous "Anonymous" commenter should learn reading comprehension
"I turned on the shower and let it heat up while I walk back into my room to grab a towel and take off my thong."
Ignore that other Anonymous person; they clearly need to learn to read. Your sentence was quite clear. A bit of tense-shifting, but that is minor. I enjoyed your story thoroughly.
very hot
Write some more please, you are really hot. An anonymous admirer.
Awesome
Very hot story. keep writing
from a fellow anal masturbator
loved your story! my pussy was dripping wet by the time you put the first bead in your ass. i joined you and filled my ass with my dildo while reading. i had a wonderful orgasm imagining us playing with our asses together ;)
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