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One Night, Our Night

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by Anonymous11/22/13

Almost poetry

This reads almost like free verse. Thanks for a good first effort.

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by Anonymous11/23/13

Beautiful

It does absolutely sound like poetry. It is absolutely beautifully written, i want an experience like that - hot but incredibly romantic...

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