loved your writing...erotic...excellent use of language and well paced.
Don't think it belongs in "loving wives" ...not unless the Anne's husband is watching her take it from the closet...
I am spoilt forever and I think of how the husband could guess this and how I could write to an EXCELLENT REVENGE STORY.................Am I wrong?????
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Anonymous11/18/13
What Husband?
An afterthought at best.Just a couple of cheats. Not very erotic
English
Gosh gee whiz..how original.
A cheating slut and a cheating asshole story. Darn, sure don't see many of them in this site.
very nice writing
loved your writing...erotic...excellent use of language and well paced.
Don't think it belongs in "loving wives" ...not unless the Anne's husband is watching her take it from the closet...
I am wrong.........
I am spoilt forever and I think of how the husband could guess this and how I could write to an EXCELLENT REVENGE STORY.................Am I wrong?????
What Husband?
An afterthought at best.Just a couple of cheats. Not very erotic
Pointless
It wasn't even a good stroke story. They had no morals so their being married provided no tension. Pointless
Well-written, 5*
But it left me feeling somewhat depressed. Why? Too close to real life.
Two people get together and fuck their marriages away.
The real deal
Have never rated a story as 5 star, This is authentic,moving and erotic
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