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by Cleardaynow11/12/13

Another very good one

Viery nice observation.

Not absolutely sure about the flow but still very nice.

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by Oldbear6311/12/13

That's what I meant

About canvasser as opposed to tourist in an earlier comment, Lesse. Observing, understanding, telling the story. Very nice.

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