All Comments on 'A Summer Day Surprise'

I congratulate you on finding a slightly different angle on a well worn theme, however I rolled my eyes when 'God' was unnecessarily introduced at the end.

not a bad first attempt. Hope you write more stories. 5*

Nice story. You are a lucky couple. Keep writing

it is amazing how many reviewers cannot stand the word God. they can allow for great variations in sexual behavior including fetishes but they cannot allow a person to express their belief in God. They have a right to not believe in God but they have no right to demand that those who believe in God not write about God.or include God in their stores.

What a great story - loved it!

And frankly I don't care what gods she believes in if it makes her happy and horney. People believe in all sorts of things, doesn't mean they can't be good at sex.

The way they talk together, from the start, gives gigantic hints that this is a TLW account! Besides, a Maytag guy would have ALL the parts in his truck outside!

4*

No cheating? No wimp husband? No cum slut? Well I'll be damned. 5* for a good start.

but very beautifully written. Nice job!

Loved the twist. No cheating.

As the father of nine, I completely understand where you're cumming from ;). Nice story.

Nice to read a story with a good foundation; passion and intense details.

Fantastic story! Have a great evening you two. ;-)

WOW

Guys that was a brilliant story

I really enjoyed it and the love at the end and the touching twist was brilliant

Keep writing

Please

leave the stupid shit about "God" out of it!

I loved the story and I loved the twist. I can see that happening in reality!

Damnit, I know I hit 4 but it only showed 2 , I had to hit it a few times before it registered and it just did not count the right one. Sorry, not my fault.

Anyways, well done about a couple trying to keep things spicy with a bit of roleplay. Sounds like he needs to introduce a little BDSM into the mix. Seems like she is a natural submissive.

Anyways, well done.

bulshit she says he cam by the sliding door. HOW OPEN THE FRRONT DOR FOR HIM

I just realized the author's name, so your desire is to break people whom you claim to love or at least care about?