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Chosen Mate Ch. 11

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by Iread2relax11/19/13

Thank you

This is an amazing tale. I want to let you know I am truly enjoyingf this story. I'd guve 100 stars if I can.

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by butters11/19/13

took so long to get here!

the wait was frustrating but worthwhile. :)

flows effortlessly on from the previous chapters, and i love how the thought-dialogue supports the surface action and communication, letting us know not only is on their lips but what's on their minds. there's a definite gearing-up towards turbulence, making me keen to read on.

absolutely loving the oldman/harry conceit - one i'd have thought hard to handle well but you do it so much better than 'well'!

hungry for the next pages,

butters x

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