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Limbo of the Beasts

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by twelveoone11/14/13

when you are on

you're on...
you're on
5

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by LesseloovesPeter11/14/13

Wisps on the wind of life. Is time now, is all time at once, is time an illusion? Do we exist in parallel universes where moments cross but never touch?

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by buried_alive11/15/13

amazing!

This poem is so visual. I can't suggest any improvements . I only wanted to say I love it and job well done. The first poem on my favorites list! !!!!!!5!!!!!!!!

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