All Comments on 'Just a note'

"the cold side of the pillow" Nicely captured the way you can love the different aspects of a personality.

had to look it up

implies something else, don't know how intentional that was, if it was, it is a hell of a contrast

and S2 is priceless

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I enjoy the last three stanzas the most. Interesting perspective on love and it's forms.

Perfect Devotee adores God with a combination of the Love a Mother has for her child , the Child has for his mother & a Miser has for his Gold !!! 5-ed !

Faire du Caca means to poop , gosh never intended to say that here!

Thanks for the comments.

Yes , I am a very faithful devotee as I have found my perfect God :-)

sweet and salty is the onset, TK U MLJ LV NV