by schilders74
Your story was written well, but needed one twist: something that Brad would not enjoy or that he would owe her something in the future.
You lost me in the first paragraph. Has prenup if he cheats----she brings other women to their bed. This contradiction was enough---stopped reading at that point.
Wouldn't having a wild threesome make him want to do it again? Seems to be a lack of logic here. 2*
Where is the punishment here? Am I missing something?
I must have missed it. It doesn't seem like he was punished. No revenge anywhere. Didn't see any cheating since she told him what to do. And as for a setup? They all had consensual sex. With maybe a little acting thrown in. All in all, this story made no sense. And the dialogue was just terrible. I'm not sure a good editor could have saved this mess. At least it was short.
That is every mans dream of punishment. Sandy should have held his cum and spit it in his mouth and he should have been made to swallow and then eat both your asses as you shit in his mouth.
The 'writing mechanics' in this posting are pretty miserable! Too many pronouns where names are needed! Occasionally, the gender of the pronouns do NOT match the sex of the apparent subject! "You can't follow the game without a program!" It also seems that a stripper instructor is also working in a downtown office ... near (?) Sweetie's job
After that, the idea of getting an STD examination every month because of your spouse's 'adventures' is hard to imagine for more than 2 months (if THAT long)
Sentence by sentence, it is very hot story! Unfortunately, the paragraphs do NOT tie together very well, nor are they consistent with the apparent personality of the characters!
And who giv a shita bout editing. A grate story is a grate story.
If that is the punishment for cheating then that is a green light for me,...lol
Hot read looking forward to reading ch.2
Lots sex but kind of boring description of the action.
I'm not sure why but I pictured his wife with a mustache and overweight .
If she has sex with others then her husband she also is a cheating slut. So the prenup is obsolete. So whats the problem? Throw the slut out and go on with a happy life!
No man with money signs that pre nup. That's just stupid. And she's concerned about std's but thinks it's okay to share her husband's lover with no worries? Again - just stupid.