All Comments on 'A Knight's Tale'

You could have used more build up, however. I think maybe an editor might help you out. Liked the story though!

So perfect

This is so underrated

Wonderful. So cleverly conceived. Must have additions to complete the story. I foresee an envious Mother Superior wanting an annointhing from Sir Knight

Hi, Daddys_beauty. Yes, I am very much in favor of using editors. They always make my writing better. But finding someone to edit erotica is not so easy, so I just do the best I can.