Poor Melinda Ch. 01

I'm sorry, but this is garbage.

Goodish start

Not really liking the way he is against her curvy body, however that being said I would like to know what happens next.

Where is the story

I am sorry but that is the biggest load of shite that I have ever read. Should be in 'non starter' not non consent. What a huge disappointment.

This is the start

I liked it. I would like to see where it goes. Don't get discouraged by anonymous people. There is a reason they stay anonymous.

Thanks for the comments

To hotmama72:

I don't know that non-consent is the best category for it. If they had a femdom category I would have gone with that. However, he is eventually going to be unhappy with the direction of the evening and unable to easily remove himself from it. As long as you're not looking for some kind of heavy pain or sadism stuff, it might eventually be what you like.

To "Goodish start":

Yeah, some guys are like that though. And it's all part of his thinking she's beneath him and therefore an easy conquest.

To PassionateKisses:

Thanks for the encouragement. Not worried about the anonymous commenters. The story's almost entirely written at this point and it will get posted regardless of the reviews.