Ryan and Dani made such an awesome couple! Their love was palpable and truly inspiring. Their kids were just as cute their parents. Good story telling!
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Anonymous11/23/13
The real meaning of love
Wonderful story. Thank you for writing a story that shows what love is truly about. You are a great writer, hope to see more of your work. Congrats.
Hey this was a great story. I will miss reading about Ryan and Dani story but I'm very happy with the ending. Hope to read more of your literary work in near future.
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Anonymous11/23/13
Bravo
This was truly one of the TOP best stories I've ever read. It truly truly was. Thank you so much for this. Please write more stories, your gift is purely graceful. :')
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Anonymous11/23/13
Thank You
Simply lovely.
Annabelle
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Anonymous11/29/13
Thank God for your friend's nagging, this is one of the best I have ever red so far.
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Anonymous01/13/14
Best tale of love
By far, this is the best series I've read. And I hate series. Dani & Ryan just made me want to read more. 5starz
Thanks for the comment. I have a couple more stories down and two in the works. I'll be posting another one hopefully in a couple of months or sooner. Since I apparently don't know how to write short stories, it'll be another series. :-)
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Anonymous01/20/14
WOW!!!!!
I so loved this series. A great and fabulous read and it was completed!!! Thanks I am reading it again and again and again. Would love to read more of your work!!! Please continue!!!
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Anonymous01/22/14
I absolutely loved this series
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Anonymous02/08/14
@ Miss P.
Can't wait for your other series, btw, I'm a guy ;-)
Love and romance is for everyone and I'm so glad guys are reading. I'm trying to wrap up my current story so that I can post a new one. I like to stay a couple of stories ahead. That means my readers have to wait, but on the other hand, they don't have to wait months in between chapters because I'm writing as I go and got stuck or don't have time to finish. The story is already completed when I post, if not fully edited, which relieves some of the stress. Editing is still a bitch though. lol.
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Anonymous02/15/14
Sighh :)
I loved this story! Can't wait to read your next story!
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Anonymous02/21/14
This was very good
I really enjoyed this story . This one was better than some of the stories I purchased.
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Anonymous04/21/14
"Life had given her the world." - I really love that line.
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Anonymous05/22/14
Bravo!!!
One of the best endings I have ever seen. This book threw me in from the beginning and captivated me... Romantic love story with a beautiful love that grew on me. Much better than some published books...
Keep up the great work....
The journey is complete and I thank you for letting me come along for the beautiful ride. I sincerely enjoyed each written word and look forward to your successful publication. You are too good not to be recognized by we readers that appreciate well written and particularly hot story lines. Looking forward to many more such stories. God bless.
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Anonymous09/28/14
I love it!
This is one of the best stories I have read here. It made me excited, cry, laugh, worry...made me feel a lot of emotions. It was really a great read. Thank you for sharing your stories. I hope you keep writing. God bless you.
Lovely story - just enough drama to keep me hooked but with happy endings all the way through for the main characters.
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Anonymous10/11/14
BRILLIANT!
What more can u say for this wonderful, romantic story!! You and your characters have captivated us all throughout this tale, without a doubt!! We yearn for more from you....PLEASE!
Yay i loved this sexy story...now lets do a sequel with their children B) *evil grin*
Awesome as usual!
Great ending to an excellent tale!
I'm giving it 5 HUGE Stars as with every other chapter. Thank you, MissPrimrose. :)
It can't be over....
Perfect. Thanks for reeling it in. Looking forward to your next adventure.
Bittersweet
Such a wonderful story, but sadly, the end to such a wonderful series.
I loved Ryan.
I am anxious to see what's next.
it was a good story
But it would be nice if u can post pictures of the character likethey do on the chamber
Five******
*******
I wish that Ryan and Dani didn't have to come to a close. Great job with their story.
you rock missprim
i loved all of this story im so happy it all ended on a wonderful note, continued success in later writing
WOW
None of this is true to life. Fiction and misleading.
This was an amazing story. The journey was so worth it. Ryan and Dannie were the best. Miss Primrose keep up the wonderful work.
my boo was right!!!!! 5*
i love love LOVE Ryan and Dani!!! and this was the perfect end to their story!!!! ^^
I loved this story!!
Ryan and Dani made such an awesome couple! Their love was palpable and truly inspiring. Their kids were just as cute their parents. Good story telling!
The real meaning of love
Wonderful story. Thank you for writing a story that shows what love is truly about. You are a great writer, hope to see more of your work. Congrats.
Good Ending...
Hey this was a great story. I will miss reading about Ryan and Dani story but I'm very happy with the ending. Hope to read more of your literary work in near future.
Bravo
This was truly one of the TOP best stories I've ever read. It truly truly was. Thank you so much for this. Please write more stories, your gift is purely graceful. :')
Thank You
Simply lovely.
Annabelle
Thank God for your friend's nagging, this is one of the best I have ever red so far.
Best tale of love
By far, this is the best series I've read. And I hate series. Dani & Ryan just made me want to read more. 5starz
@ Best tale of love
Thanks for the comment. I have a couple more stories down and two in the works. I'll be posting another one hopefully in a couple of months or sooner. Since I apparently don't know how to write short stories, it'll be another series. :-)
WOW!!!!!
I so loved this series. A great and fabulous read and it was completed!!! Thanks I am reading it again and again and again. Would love to read more of your work!!! Please continue!!!
I absolutely loved this series
@ Miss P.
Can't wait for your other series, btw, I'm a guy ;-)
@anonymous 2/8/2014
Love and romance is for everyone and I'm so glad guys are reading. I'm trying to wrap up my current story so that I can post a new one. I like to stay a couple of stories ahead. That means my readers have to wait, but on the other hand, they don't have to wait months in between chapters because I'm writing as I go and got stuck or don't have time to finish. The story is already completed when I post, if not fully edited, which relieves some of the stress. Editing is still a bitch though. lol.
Sighh :)
I loved this story! Can't wait to read your next story!
This was very good
I really enjoyed this story . This one was better than some of the stories I purchased.
"Life had given her the world." - I really love that line.
Bravo!!!
One of the best endings I have ever seen. This book threw me in from the beginning and captivated me... Romantic love story with a beautiful love that grew on me. Much better than some published books...
Keep up the great work....
The end
The journey is complete and I thank you for letting me come along for the beautiful ride. I sincerely enjoyed each written word and look forward to your successful publication. You are too good not to be recognized by we readers that appreciate well written and particularly hot story lines. Looking forward to many more such stories. God bless.
I love it!
This is one of the best stories I have read here. It made me excited, cry, laugh, worry...made me feel a lot of emotions. It was really a great read. Thank you for sharing your stories. I hope you keep writing. God bless you.
thanks
Lovely story - just enough drama to keep me hooked but with happy endings all the way through for the main characters.
BRILLIANT!
What more can u say for this wonderful, romantic story!! You and your characters have captivated us all throughout this tale, without a doubt!! We yearn for more from you....PLEASE!
wonderful
Loved,loved , loved it. I want a Ryan. Everyone should read this story. Most importantly you FINISHED. Keep on writing.
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