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by demure101

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
The bright illusions one so badly needs

But to undo them in a wink & leave

You hopeless , in a garden full of weeds .

---- bravo , Demure, bravo ! 5-ed , 'nuff said ...!

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
Reason?

Contentedly ? sticks out, why?

but the last three lines bring it to a crashing conclusion

Crafted Well

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Hope...rewards some and crushes others.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Beautiful

Sweetly sad and feminine. Wonderful line: hope in you may wake

the bright illusions one so badly needs

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