The guy ends up with the wife of the guy who cuckolds him. Every fucking time in these stories. Absolutely no creativity, same boring, tired ending. Never happens in real life because no real man wants a daily reminder of the guy who cuckolded him, wants to fuck a woman who spent years fucking his rival. Yet no one on LW can seem to think of any other ending to their stories. JPB has used it himself a dozen times.
Women are usually a lot cleverer than this... He really should have done them both at the first opportunity but his wimping out gave us a story worth reading... *****
Marcello Mastroiani and the "Divorce A'la Italian Style"
First it all. The story is a very good Modern Figaro Type Revenge story mixing with Cruel Revenge part. Naturaly 5*****. In the 60s decad the divorce was forbiden in Italy and the majority of the Movie Makers were the free divorce supporters. More movie was shot in Italy to assist the divorce supporters (for example Dustin Hofmann was as a guest star in an Italian divorce supporter movie with Stefania Sandrelli....). One of the most famouse supporter movie was "Divorce A'la Italian Style=Divorzio All'Italiana". Marcello Mastroiani played the main character, who organized his wife to cheat. He killed the cheaters and he got short prison punishment (quick anger coused manshlaughter) and he got parola at meantime of the prison punishment for his good behavioral in the jail. He marry his true lover................
Naturaly JPB brings his style, because this type of Revenge Story NEEDS LONG EPILOG. The story NEED THE LONGER ROMANTIC REVENGE PART TO BURN THE BITCH FORTH..........children custody lost is huge punishment for the majority of women (about 85% of women) and excellent Romantic way to burn the bitch..............and other way Romantic Revege.........Unfortunatelly JPB writes very few longer epilog Revenge Stories, but he writes a longer epilog Revenge Story, that will be Hyper Super as "Rob and Amy" is.
@ ID I has not said this story is wrong. Yes this story is very good and I thought of the famouse "Divorzio All'Italiana" movie, when I read it. It is one of the many-many without longer epilog (good) JPB Revenge Stories. I like to Burn The Bitches in longer epilogs.
BTW I read a JPB comment at an other Author's story about 2005-2004, where HE COMPLAINED ABOUT SHORT EPILOG!!!!........I am pinching JPB a little in humorous way.......
@ID My 8th story (and my favorit my own story) is under edition (I hope my helper does not stop to edit, she is at the 40% of my story) and I Burn The Bitch after 7 years to the divorce...........
Wow! You've become Stangstar's twin. Next you'll be driving a mustang in every story. Did your real wife cheat on you? You've gotten a dose of reality that I find refreshing, if also surprising. Five stars.
Cast Iron frying pan, my favorite choice in implements of husbandly chastisement!
Well, either that or a shooting iron! Out of the pan into the field of fire?
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Anonymous02/24/15
2 star
revenge was fine, but overall tale was terrible.
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Anonymous09/14/15
Good story except for two parts
No way he sells "burglar" to the Police. He went overboard when he beat up Jim and most likely would have done jail time since his bitch wife SAW what he did. And she would have wanted to put him in jail to both get more in the divorce AND get full custody of the kids. She would have gotten both. And even if she just gave up, why would he give the cheating cunt that much in the divorce? Especially the two grand a month in alimony. Make her work for every penny the Courts award her and still try to give her nothing. Damn what a bitch!
The story is written and all your pontificating is not going to change one iota what is written. Go suck another dick you shitwad and stop reading here.
Iron Dragon, pay attention what rjordan is saying.
He is referring to the roll of low lite film for the Canon Rebel camera. What rjordan is sarcastic about is that the Canon is digital and no roll film will ever fit into it. JPB, take note as well.
Was a good story though, thanks JPB.
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Anonymous03/26/16
Not your best.
Maybe your worst. Here you succomb to the demands of the BTB crowd. She's too much of a whore to be believed. You are a good writer though, and I've enjoyed many of your other offerings, as I'm sure that I'll enjoy others in the future. However, there's got to be angst, or at least a twist to make a good LW story. Thanks anyway for your effort.
Read it before
Same story, different names, boring.
Similar....but I still liked it
Please publish more often
of course it boring to the real cucks out there
if she fucked everyone and if she had you lick it out of her....hell charlieb4 would be the first in line.
2ND VERSES
almost the same as the first verses, TK U MLJ LV NV
JPB doing BTB
Awesome as always.
5 Stars.
Great read as always JPB.
Huedogg2 you so hit the nail on the head :)
Once again
The guy ends up with the wife of the guy who cuckolds him. Every fucking time in these stories. Absolutely no creativity, same boring, tired ending. Never happens in real life because no real man wants a daily reminder of the guy who cuckolded him, wants to fuck a woman who spent years fucking his rival. Yet no one on LW can seem to think of any other ending to their stories. JPB has used it himself a dozen times.
Another Delightful Fantasy
Women are usually a lot cleverer than this... He really should have done them both at the first opportunity but his wimping out gave us a story worth reading... *****
Just JPB BTBing by the numbers story
A no frills story which merits this no frills comment.
Thanks Bob
Its like cable TV....when there's nothing good on I go the JPB Channel and scroll through the episodes.
Marcello Mastroiani and the "Divorce A'la Italian Style"
First it all. The story is a very good Modern Figaro Type Revenge story mixing with Cruel Revenge part. Naturaly 5*****. In the 60s decad the divorce was forbiden in Italy and the majority of the Movie Makers were the free divorce supporters. More movie was shot in Italy to assist the divorce supporters (for example Dustin Hofmann was as a guest star in an Italian divorce supporter movie with Stefania Sandrelli....). One of the most famouse supporter movie was "Divorce A'la Italian Style=Divorzio All'Italiana". Marcello Mastroiani played the main character, who organized his wife to cheat. He killed the cheaters and he got short prison punishment (quick anger coused manshlaughter) and he got parola at meantime of the prison punishment for his good behavioral in the jail. He marry his true lover................
Longer epilog...........
Naturaly JPB brings his style, because this type of Revenge Story NEEDS LONG EPILOG. The story NEED THE LONGER ROMANTIC REVENGE PART TO BURN THE BITCH FORTH..........children custody lost is huge punishment for the majority of women (about 85% of women) and excellent Romantic way to burn the bitch..............and other way Romantic Revege.........Unfortunatelly JPB writes very few longer epilog Revenge Stories, but he writes a longer epilog Revenge Story, that will be Hyper Super as "Rob and Amy" is.
@Duna
No, this tale doesn't need a long epilogue. It's great just the way it is.
Humorous pinching
@ ID I has not said this story is wrong. Yes this story is very good and I thought of the famouse "Divorzio All'Italiana" movie, when I read it. It is one of the many-many without longer epilog (good) JPB Revenge Stories. I like to Burn The Bitches in longer epilogs.
BTW I read a JPB comment at an other Author's story about 2005-2004, where HE COMPLAINED ABOUT SHORT EPILOG!!!!........I am pinching JPB a little in humorous way.......
Epilog
@ID My 8th story (and my favorit my own story) is under edition (I hope my helper does not stop to edit, she is at the 40% of my story) and I Burn The Bitch after 7 years to the divorce...........
The best part is Shelly beating Kenny's ass with a cast iron frying pan and dumping him on the sidewalk like the garbage he is.
Frying Pad !
I loved the frying pad part !
Excellent
Merrie should have been exposed to everyone. She got off easy. Fucking skank cheating whore cunt wife.
Five Stars
What Did You Do With the Real JPB?
Wow! You've become Stangstar's twin. Next you'll be driving a mustang in every story. Did your real wife cheat on you? You've gotten a dose of reality that I find refreshing, if also surprising. Five stars.
How old is this story?
The guy had a Canon Rebel camera and a roll of low light film in his car? Was he on his way to taking it to the antique auction?
A good Just Plain Bob story! Wow! Revenge! I totally liked it!
Enjoyed it
Thanks for the offering.
rjordan's just pissed off because Hubby divorced Wifey after setting her up. Some guys just don't like sharing, man. lol
Seriously, this was some damn good BTB.
cast in iron!
Cast Iron frying pan, my favorite choice in implements of husbandly chastisement!
Well, either that or a shooting iron! Out of the pan into the field of fire?
2 star
revenge was fine, but overall tale was terrible.
Good story except for two parts
No way he sells "burglar" to the Police. He went overboard when he beat up Jim and most likely would have done jail time since his bitch wife SAW what he did. And she would have wanted to put him in jail to both get more in the divorce AND get full custody of the kids. She would have gotten both. And even if she just gave up, why would he give the cheating cunt that much in the divorce? Especially the two grand a month in alimony. Make her work for every penny the Courts award her and still try to give her nothing. Damn what a bitch!
Piss and moan all you want annony...
The story is written and all your pontificating is not going to change one iota what is written. Go suck another dick you shitwad and stop reading here.
Iron Dragon, pay attention what rjordan is saying.
He is referring to the roll of low lite film for the Canon Rebel camera. What rjordan is sarcastic about is that the Canon is digital and no roll film will ever fit into it. JPB, take note as well.
Was a good story though, thanks JPB.
Not your best.
Maybe your worst. Here you succomb to the demands of the BTB crowd. She's too much of a whore to be believed. You are a good writer though, and I've enjoyed many of your other offerings, as I'm sure that I'll enjoy others in the future. However, there's got to be angst, or at least a twist to make a good LW story. Thanks anyway for your effort.
Thanks***
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