All Comments on 'Subway Ride'

lost interest half way through first page

Nice but too long...

Glad to see you back. I'll be reading this a few more times, like I almost always do with your stories.

Great story... and it WASN'T too long as some other can't appreciate the building in the story. Can't wait to see what happens in the afternoon. Great topic, setting, and sets the scene for much more fun.

ignore the first 2 peoples comments, the story is brilliant, please give us another chapter, loved this one

Yes it was a slow start, but one of the best "subway" stories I have ever read. I hope you will continue with this story. However within the next chapter please fill the credibility gap between her religious upbringing and her behaviour. A good way to do this might be the "corrupting" influences of her fellow school girls including how long she has been at this school. Thanks for a good read.

Good story. Like to read what happens when she returns, maybe she will be with one of her girlfriends or even with one of the teachers.

Oh. that was so hot. Came 3 times reading this. Please write more stories. :D

Teachl1980, You have been one of my favorite authors on this site for quite some time. Good to have you back! Have missed your stories. Would love to read the next chapters of not only this but also teacher Sarah. Thanks again.

Glad you're back Teachgirl, you're a good storyteller and writer. I enjoyed this story very much. Your lead was believable in the context of her world, and likeable. The subway setting was hot, and I'd like to see what other sexual adventures she and her new friends will enjoy. I hope this turns into a two or three episode arc. There are so many possibilities in DC with everything from the subway to the White House to the Smithsonian or the many after dark clubs.

If you were to reboot or finish the Cassie and teacher Sarah stories that would be wonderful, I've read those stories several times.

Good story, I love reading your stories!

Most of the sex stories on the net are garbage and I usually give up by the third paragraph. This however was the tops, just what I want, I was Rock Hard from early in the story and struggled not to fill my pants with a cum load before I got to the end. It was well worth waiting for as I managed to reach my forehead with the first three shots. MORE PLEASE

I'm very gay but I love reading anything about interracial sex. I liked the way this story developed. It seemed innocent in the beginning but by the end, she was looking forward to taking the old man's black cock again. Wow! I would have liked watching that show.

I've come, like, dozens of times to your stories. Any more you feel like publishing would be awesome with me.

If I could give you a hundred stars, I would. I dripped thru this entire tale and hope like hell that I get fucked like that in a subway.

You have a gift. They way you wrote this made me think about it all day I couldn't getbi y out of my head. This piece of literature has done something no other single storybor book has and yhat is made me think made me wonder and made me feel. Who ever it is that wrote this should begin to expand and Wright a book.

This is by far one of the best stories that I have read on Literotica!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Try writing one where the girl isn't an empty headed moron

How did you know my favorite fantasy? That was AWESOOOOOME! !

Hope there is a sequel in the making

I hope there is a sequel. I have read all your stories and love them. I hope you write a new one soon.

well done

Not well written, and the narrator is an airhead, but this is my ultimate fantasy and I still got off.

How can this be the end? Almost two years and no new stories. What will it take for her to write again?

Brilliant. Really hope there is more to come. Best story iv read in this site.

I don't think I'd want to be a white husband in America for anything! Looks like a lost cause once women behave like this.I notice he did get a mention early on in the story -- then gets completely forgotten.

Love the detail here: "He smiled at me and asked if I was ok. I nodded and he smiled again."

Makes a good story great! Nice job.

I still visit this author's page from time to time to see if she's posted any new content. So sad to see that she hasn't! I wonder if she's moved on to another avenue for publishing her erotic stories? If anyone knows, kindly tell me ...

Teachgirl, (or are you finally Teachwoman now? lol), I think I'll spend the next few weeks reworking my way through your stories. I hope you're still spinning fantasies, somewhere, for someone.

Of course, if you ever want to again write something for this site, don't hesitate.

Please write part 2.

very repulsive

This is not only promoting pedophilia but this is saying a bunch of black man forcing a white girl into sex. This is disgusting. To push this narrative is racist and cruel especially given the history of the world. Definitely reported.

I thought the story was so hot. Picture the younger me in her place all very exited and exposed. I was so turn on. Please more stories like this. Thanks

This is a hot story and I hope that soon you will find a second part to it. (Please, please, please)

Hot story but could have been better without the BBC fetish

not too bad quite good

love your stories and your dirty mind !!

That's the kind of subway ride of my sexual fantasies. 5 plus stars, at least. My count was drenched. Loved it!

Orpheum69

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Hotter than hot. It's not rape if she helps.

Disgusting way to treat a young girl

Loved it, reminds me of my train experiences

Anna

Brilliant writing!!!

Kacey will take note of the pleasures given her by the black old man and other young black boys. She will remember her ride on the subway and think about her mother's jealously of her sexy shape earned by her rugged soccer regiment. After having sex with the Old Man, she will remember how he gave her pleasure and how he encouraged other young black men to sample the charms of a well built Catholic girl while respecting her boundaries. Coming from a Catholic High School with its stuffy rules all girls had to follow, she will look at her well built Mother and sense the fakery she has to endure in the society of her life over the protectiveness of her daughter and compare the protectiveness of the Old Man who took her to places she had never been exposed to.

She has some resentment towards her overbearing mother and thinks about the Old Man before putting her Mother as the woman who falls on the lap of the OLD MAN who takes advantage of a blackout to hiss in her ear comforting words as he rubs her overheating clit before inserting his cock inside her to take ownership of her pussy.

She feels everything and stays quiet to take the humiliating cum dump inside her. Kacey knows Mom is a racist and how good would it for her to see how the other half lives and thinks about the changes in Mom's life and how good it would be for her to change how she feels about the downtrodden. After all, it was the OLD MAN who inserted changes in Kacey's brain to program the changes Kacey would start to make once she chooses a college that is more liberal arts than technical.

Kacey goes to a black run college much to the consternation of her Mom and she would ditch her Catholic wear to dress provocatively as she makes friends there. She would enjoy watching Mom walk around fearfully among black studs as she deliciously thinks about fixing Mom with one of the black men. Even buying her a African sleeveless dress sans panties and bra for her birthday!