I absolutely loved this story! I don't usually read many in this section, but WOW!!
I noticed myself reading faster and faster to see what happened next...lol.
o cmon, u cant be serious, a 10inch long cock? and she took it all in? and they fucked for 6 hours, dude u must be outta ur mind, even pornstars cant do that, mustve taken a whole bottle of viagra....
nice story why did you stop would like to hear more on these two
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Anonymous10/28/09
unrealistic
i couldn't even get into this story what guy would act like that he would be so pissed that she was coming home that he would find a way to move in with a friend or live at the beach and keep the monster dicks in your gay head
The story was great until you added the sister fucking 30 guys one night. Here you had a very erotic story and ruined it with the gang bang. Initially gave you a 4, but after reflection would have dropped it to a 2.
Thankfully, it would appear that this particular author has given up his writing exploits. I'm assuming he's come to the same conclusion as most of us here already realize - it's all a crock of crap.
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"I knew you'd be coming in here," Kate said, a smile on her face when she saw his cock begin to harden. "Maybe you'd like to finish that massage now," she suggested, one hand trailing down between her legs to rub up and down between her spread pussy lips, then bringing her finger up to her mouth and gently sucking on it. "Suck my pussy for me, John, suck it," she implored her brother. "Suck my pussy until I cum."
""
.....ummm, bad timing sis, I really need to take a shit, like right now! (Hehe)
""
why don't you start your breakfast with the breakfast of champions," Kate suggested, pushing her chair away from the table and turning it so that she was facing him. "Doesn't it look tasty?"
""
Damn you're a horny butch, sis! I don't do anything till Ive had three cups of coffee, so put a cork in it or sit on my lap or something, just be quiet and let me wake up.
""
John quickly dropped his baggies to the floor,
""
Baggies? Heh.. Well I guess you cant really call them shorts... Hell its hard to even find shorts anymore, all they seem to sell nowadays are those gay ass knee length things, so tacky, lol!
""
Because he had just cum, John couldn't get to that point and his cock was impossibly hard as Kate continued to ride him. Kate fucked him steadily for more than 30 minutes before she stopped, out of breath, her face flushed.
"Oh, John, I can't believe you're still hard," she said. "This is beyond my wildest dreams,"
""
Hell, I do better than that before I cum the first time, lol. ...and if Im on my back I can pretty much go forever, just cant seem to get off lying on my back:/ (guess there are perks to being in the minority here, hehe;)
I did think it was kinda funny how she took his big ass cock up in her without batting an eye or taking her time! Makes you wonder what the hell shes been shoving up there!!
""
John was in shock as Kate began to worm her ass onto his cock.
""
Rofl, like shes going to really take that up the ass without real lube?! Gotta love fiction!!
""
God, you can fuck me all day and all night with that thing," Kate said, shaking her head. "But let's go to the bedroom. It will be more comfortable,"
""
...sooo, does this mean no surfing this morning?? ;)
""
John dislodged himself from his sister's pussy and went to his own room through the adjoining bathroom, they had been fucking non-stop for six hours.
""
Hard for six hours?! Buhahaha! Can you fucking imagine if that was real, how fucking painful it would be? His dick would feel like a truck ran over it!!
""
Kate's pussy was raw, like it had never been, not even when she had taken on 30 guys one night for the hell of it at a fraternity party.
""
Holy shit! Sis is a huge slut!! Looks like brother should have had her tested before he licked it or fucked it! Now he'll prolly have a swollen dick for all the wrong reasons, rofl!
Well all in all it was pretty damned entertaining! That certainly rang a lot more true on some levels than most stories on here! Thats more like what you would expect from a brother when his hot sister wants him! Thanks for writing!
English
Horny Woman
This was a terrific story. What teen-aged boy wouldn't love for is sister to return from law school as a horny woman who wants him?
Great story so far!
VERY hot story! I'm really enjoying it.
Please tell me you're planning on continuing it?
Thanks
The best I've read in a long time!!
I absolutely loved this story! I don't usually read many in this section, but WOW!!
I noticed myself reading faster and faster to see what happened next...lol.
Keep up the good work!
More PLEASE!!!!
Great beginning to "Home From College", please continue the
adventure with a few more chapters!
More!!!!!
Please continue this story its great
Awesome.
You are the single best erotic writer on this website. This story blew me away
Hot
Now we just need the rv trip!!!!!!
be realistic man!!!!!!!!!!!
o cmon, u cant be serious, a 10inch long cock? and she took it all in? and they fucked for 6 hours, dude u must be outta ur mind, even pornstars cant do that, mustve taken a whole bottle of viagra....
Great Story
nice story why did you stop would like to hear more on these two
unrealistic
i couldn't even get into this story what guy would act like that he would be so pissed that she was coming home that he would find a way to move in with a friend or live at the beach and keep the monster dicks in your gay head
Bad ending
The story was great until you added the sister fucking 30 guys one night. Here you had a very erotic story and ruined it with the gang bang. Initially gave you a 4, but after reflection would have dropped it to a 2.
Yeah, what about the RV trip?
Ditto to what everyone else has said. Sometimes we wish we had a younger brother! I guess our dad will have to do!!
Drivel
Thankfully, it would appear that this particular author has given up his writing exploits. I'm assuming he's come to the same conclusion as most of us here already realize - it's all a crock of crap.
I liked it !
Some people seem to find it difficult to separate fiction from real life. But I like all,your stories.
Will you ever write the next chapter covering the RV trip ? I do hope so !
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"I knew you'd be coming in here," Kate said, a smile on her face when she saw his cock begin to harden. "Maybe you'd like to finish that massage now," she suggested, one hand trailing down between her legs to rub up and down between her spread pussy lips, then bringing her finger up to her mouth and gently sucking on it. "Suck my pussy for me, John, suck it," she implored her brother. "Suck my pussy until I cum."
""
.....ummm, bad timing sis, I really need to take a shit, like right now! (Hehe)
""
why don't you start your breakfast with the breakfast of champions," Kate suggested, pushing her chair away from the table and turning it so that she was facing him. "Doesn't it look tasty?"
""
Damn you're a horny butch, sis! I don't do anything till Ive had three cups of coffee, so put a cork in it or sit on my lap or something, just be quiet and let me wake up.
""
John quickly dropped his baggies to the floor,
""
Baggies? Heh.. Well I guess you cant really call them shorts... Hell its hard to even find shorts anymore, all they seem to sell nowadays are those gay ass knee length things, so tacky, lol!
""
Because he had just cum, John couldn't get to that point and his cock was impossibly hard as Kate continued to ride him. Kate fucked him steadily for more than 30 minutes before she stopped, out of breath, her face flushed.
"Oh, John, I can't believe you're still hard," she said. "This is beyond my wildest dreams,"
""
Hell, I do better than that before I cum the first time, lol. ...and if Im on my back I can pretty much go forever, just cant seem to get off lying on my back:/ (guess there are perks to being in the minority here, hehe;)
I did think it was kinda funny how she took his big ass cock up in her without batting an eye or taking her time! Makes you wonder what the hell shes been shoving up there!!
""
John was in shock as Kate began to worm her ass onto his cock.
""
Rofl, like shes going to really take that up the ass without real lube?! Gotta love fiction!!
""
God, you can fuck me all day and all night with that thing," Kate said, shaking her head. "But let's go to the bedroom. It will be more comfortable,"
""
...sooo, does this mean no surfing this morning?? ;)
""
John dislodged himself from his sister's pussy and went to his own room through the adjoining bathroom, they had been fucking non-stop for six hours.
""
Hard for six hours?! Buhahaha! Can you fucking imagine if that was real, how fucking painful it would be? His dick would feel like a truck ran over it!!
""
Kate's pussy was raw, like it had never been, not even when she had taken on 30 guys one night for the hell of it at a fraternity party.
""
Holy shit! Sis is a huge slut!! Looks like brother should have had her tested before he licked it or fucked it! Now he'll prolly have a swollen dick for all the wrong reasons, rofl!
Well all in all it was pretty damned entertaining! That certainly rang a lot more true on some levels than most stories on here! Thats more like what you would expect from a brother when his hot sister wants him! Thanks for writing!
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