All Comments on 'First Girl'

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Arago007Arago007over 10 years ago
Great start...

Cute characters + hot sex = fun read :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Don't Stop Now

Looking forward to the next chapter.

LacedUpLacedUpover 10 years ago
Part 2

Great start. Hope to see more of these two ladies!!!

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 10 years ago
Well-written

Well-written and hot! Good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it

Hot!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 10 years ago
Wonderful!

Good plot, lovely characters, pleasant and believable friendship development, verrrry enjoyable sex scene, and the whole thing was well written and proof-read. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More

You have to continue.... I wanna know what happens ..... If shandy becomes lesbian!!!

redlion75redlion75about 8 years ago

not becomes a lesbian just admits she is

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Nice story

Not lesbian, maybe bi. Still, I would love to read more about Shandy and Trina.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Mmm mouthwatering.

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