Good plot, lovely characters, pleasant and believable friendship development, verrrry enjoyable sex scene, and the whole thing was well written and proof-read. Please write more.
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Anonymous02/06/16
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You have to continue.... I wanna know what happens ..... If shandy becomes lesbian!!!
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Great start...
Cute characters + hot sex = fun read :)
Don't Stop Now
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Part 2
Great start. Hope to see more of these two ladies!!!
Well-written
Well-written and hot! Good start.
Loved it
Hot!
Wonderful!
Good plot, lovely characters, pleasant and believable friendship development, verrrry enjoyable sex scene, and the whole thing was well written and proof-read. Please write more.
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You have to continue.... I wanna know what happens ..... If shandy becomes lesbian!!!
not becomes a lesbian just admits she is
Nice story
Not lesbian, maybe bi. Still, I would love to read more about Shandy and Trina.
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