Cute characters + hot sex = fun read :)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Great start. Hope to see more of these two ladies!!!
Well-written and hot! Good start.
Hot!
Good plot, lovely characters, pleasant and believable friendship development, verrrry enjoyable sex scene, and the whole thing was well written and proof-read. Please write more.
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Great start...
Cute characters + hot sex = fun read :)
Don't Stop Now
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Part 2
Great start. Hope to see more of these two ladies!!!
Well-written
Well-written and hot! Good start.
Loved it
Hot!
Wonderful!
Good plot, lovely characters, pleasant and believable friendship development, verrrry enjoyable sex scene, and the whole thing was well written and proof-read. Please write more.
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