which category to put your story in? It surely seems so. Here's a little hint. If your story is about a rape then your story belongs in the Non-consent/Reluctance category. Exceptions can be made when the rape turns into something mutually appreciated. More exceptions exist for lesbian BDSM, but that's yet another category. Ending the story by calling the raped one a slave, and/or suggesting (without a shred of evidence in the story) that the rapist loved the raped one does NOT turn the story into another category.
Aside from that, this was a decent Non-consent/Reluctance story. What bugged me (after realizing with annoyance that your story was improperly categorised) was at the end where you tried to make me believe there was any love left between the two. Otherwise it was pretty good. You should write more.
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Anonymous11/23/13
Fun story
It is really the boyfriend that should have been forced to take the dildo.
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Anonymous04/28/15
Boring
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Anonymous10/22/15
This is like every plot of brazzers pornstar punishment ever made
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Anonymous11/04/15
Clearly written by an 11yro boy
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Anonymous12/16/15
Unrealistic and fake
This is lit erotica not some child story telling contest. This is bullshit
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which category to put your story in? It surely seems so. Here's a little hint. If your story is about a rape then your story belongs in the Non-consent/Reluctance category. Exceptions can be made when the rape turns into something mutually appreciated. More exceptions exist for lesbian BDSM, but that's yet another category. Ending the story by calling the raped one a slave, and/or suggesting (without a shred of evidence in the story) that the rapist loved the raped one does NOT turn the story into another category.
Aside from that, this was a decent Non-consent/Reluctance story. What bugged me (after realizing with annoyance that your story was improperly categorised) was at the end where you tried to make me believe there was any love left between the two. Otherwise it was pretty good. You should write more.
Fun story
It is really the boyfriend that should have been forced to take the dildo.
Boring
This is like every plot of brazzers pornstar punishment ever made
Clearly written by an 11yro boy
Unrealistic and fake
This is lit erotica not some child story telling contest. This is bullshit
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