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Bravo!!
Graspped my mind with words to my eye's...
As I sat and read and "Sigh's"
WOW how kinky is this?
This was so hot I masterbated to it serveral times and totally imagined you especially after reading your poem have sex with me. I read that first then this and it was SOOooo HOT HOT HOT!
Superb
This story is quite simply superb. It is charged with emotion. The characters are realistic. The inner struggle of the protagonist is common in this genre, but you bring something new to it. You truly understand what she was feeling and thinking. Please keep writing stories for this genre, and please keep writing in general.
Smiles...
Sometimes One comes across a story of such wicked delight that it takes One's breath away. This is one of those stories...
Excellent addition to the genre. Rape is sick, make no bones about it, but Rapefantasy, or Rapefiction, is a legitimate source of the most taboo of erotic feelings. My God girl, this is a good effort at tasting those feelings.
Very familiar
Sweetpetite, I was very impressesd and arroused.
In particular I love the way the female vasilates betweet wanting and not wanting to be treated roughly. Your inclusion of paced refrences to hair play are very realistic, sexy and excellent in making and keepiing the story yours!
Nasty!!
Oh, I love your wicked mind LOL
That was a HOT little story!! Off to read more of your stuff ;-)
OOOOH
Hot story I really liked it but found I craved more detail, not a critism just my taste!
the best of all time
Great story and in my opinion a hall of fame candidate. Its so graphic, naughty and erotic all in one. I love how it goes from non consensual to consensual. Both people discovering that the same taboo thing excites them. Your attention to detail was fantastic.
Outstanding
I loved it. Beautifully written. Concise and yet highly descriptive.
Loved this story...
i loved this story. It fulfills it's promise, and left me wanting more. Thank you.
Good Story!
Thanks it was very good. A good read. Only one problem, towards the end you called her "Valley" instead of "Vallerie".
orgasmic
extreamly orgasmic
Nice
Not much more to say than that. Except maybe "very".
Good
Sexy story but it could stand to be longer! Maybe more build up?
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