I just broke up the story into 4 parts and you really have to read all of them to get to the "meat" - as you put it! My previous story "Breaking Barriers" ran to several pages so I thought this was a better way...
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Anonymous11/26/13
canineteeth to misterwho
do i need to even tell you how wonderful it is to read your stories. where is the sequel to the temple episode and am waiting eagerly for the other 3 parts of this one too!!! happy writing
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Anonymous12/14/13
from the old one
Thanks for your response. Wonderful story telling. But the parts are small. No serious cavil.
I fear I concluded long back(with my little familiarity with a few Indian languages) that you are most likely to be of the "metallic caste" (as the metal is called in Sanskrit,Tamil or some others). No response needed. May God bless you
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from the old one
quite sensitively written as usual but as they say
"where's the meat?"
Go through the series of 4!
I just broke up the story into 4 parts and you really have to read all of them to get to the "meat" - as you put it! My previous story "Breaking Barriers" ran to several pages so I thought this was a better way...
canineteeth to misterwho
do i need to even tell you how wonderful it is to read your stories. where is the sequel to the temple episode and am waiting eagerly for the other 3 parts of this one too!!! happy writing
from the old one
Thanks for your response. Wonderful story telling. But the parts are small. No serious cavil.
I fear I concluded long back(with my little familiarity with a few Indian languages) that you are most likely to be of the "metallic caste" (as the metal is called in Sanskrit,Tamil or some others). No response needed. May God bless you
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