Act Your Age

i'm enjoyin' a voyeur's vicarious pleasure in this

" menage a trois " , Oldbear !! 5-ed .

some of the contrast here

is genius
In a homey Rockwellian scene

Her soft, white thigh against my face

although I haven't read most of yours, this is the best I've read.
you have some loose ends (pardon the pun) i.e.
Husband, father, grandfather
Shamelessly sparking another
another what (husband, father, grandfather?) because there is no direct referent that follows...fived but You should be more focused, tie it together better

1201 , think Oldbear meant

Husband , father , grandfather shamelessly
Sparkin' another's
Wife , mother , grandmother .......
There's a hidden allusion to adultery here , Oldtimer !

BUT TRY NOT TO CRAWL

strut and jive keeps one alive, TK U MLJ LV NV

this one is very rich in texture of imagery, something about it draws me yet I want to resist it...strange feeling...

The flip flop

between desires is really well crafted
I got flashes of naughty and dirty, meshed with normality of life.
as if I was touring through your thoughts, at home with the family, then a flash of doing something you shouldn't. one of the best I have seen of yours, and it was different, full marks :-)

Thank you good people

Lesse - maybe you are picking up on that trace of guilt in the back of my mind?
Twelveoone - I get your point! Yikes!

Belated Acknowledgement!!!!

Ashesh used the word "Rockwellian" in a comment to me some time ago - fortunately it stuck in my head because it seemed just right for the line in this poem. Unfortuately the source of it didn't stick in my head until I just re-read the earlier comment. My apologies and thanks to you, Ashesh.

You know I love

The duality express here and the way in which you express it.