Last Night First Time

Sweet

I wish you hadn't left so much out. I'm not talking about the sex, anyone can write about that. I'm talking about the feelings she was having and he was having. There was so much more you could have given us as readers, but you truncated the entire story and it left me feeling empty. At the end

So cute and sweet and sexy.

I think some of the description needs a little work, but it's a great story! Very sweet.

please never refer to a dick as a "member" or a "peepee" or a "thing"
instant turn-off