Somali MILF Gets Gang Banged!

you obviously pay no heed to comments left for you here, you have been told many times that your work is awfull, so i am not going to repeat that once more, all your many efforts are a variation on the same theme, really think you have a mental issue of some sort that you may need help with, not worth a star, crap as usual..

Anonymous

I've seen a few negative comments from an anonymous reader. Not sure if it's the same person, or if they are just giving harsh constructive criticism, but the fact that this person seems to have read a few of your submissions, tells me that deep down tgey like your stories, if not, why would they continue to read?
I thought it was an interesting premise and I liked the perspective. You should practice being more descriptive. This story, with a few tweaks, could have been much longer.