All Comments on 'Oz: Beautiful Wickedness'

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d_shaned_shaneover 10 years ago
Story

I liked your choice of words, very fitting for the time period. I think you should work with an editor and polish this one up a little bit. Over all it was a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Awesome story

I like this story.

She is different of your other story with this pairing.

I like that Theodora is the dominant and the submission of Eva.

I really hope to read another story with this pairing and I hope also to see Glinda, perhaps a little Theodora/Glinda or Eva/Glinda.

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