All Comments on 'Living Thirst'

a little bit clichéd,

I cliché with the best of them, though I try not to

It's 14 years old. I came across it recently and thought it fit with Literotica.

The last line doesn't quite fit with the rest. Not bad though.

I think your pome "Living Thirst" is Lovely.

A funny thing happened last weekend. My girlfriend had stayed over friday night and saturday morning. while I was showering, Barb, was on my computer, checking her email. When I came out, she was reading something and laughing. She looked up and said, hey Kat, poetry and lesbian porn? Yeah, Barb, you found me out, along with being Gay, kissing girls and licking pussy, I'm a closet poetry reader. I just can't help myself, I have tried mixing it up with stories about hot lesbian sex. But I knew sooner or later, I would be outed. Barbara, was laughing so hard she pee'd her pants. I wanted Barb. out of those panties anyway..

Gay Kat.